WSCLGanonymous readerReport 2013-09-07 22:23:46Take your time, break it up, use paragraphs. Otherwise, quit trying to be something you are not – a writer. Xnxx com Otherwise, quit trying to be something you are not – a writer. Did I miss something?«12» WSCLGanonymous readerReport 2013-08-30 23:34:56Lots of errors in this story and it totally lacked realism!!!anonymous readerReport 2013-08-29 22:03:16Good story, but you need to learn to properly tag your work. Otherwise, quit trying to be something you are not – a writer. Otherwise, quit trying to be something you are not – a writer. 8 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2013-09-07 22:24:01Take your time, break it up, use paragraphs. Otherwise, quit trying to be something you are not – a writer. WSCLGanonymous readerReport 2013-08-30 23:34:56Lots of errors in this story and it totally lacked realism!!!anonymous readerReport 2013-08-29 22:03:16Good story, but you need to learn to properly tag your work. 8 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2013-09-07 22:24:01Take your time, break it up, use paragraphs. Otherwise, quit trying to be something you are not – a writer. Did I miss something?«12» Otherwise, quit trying to be something you are not – a writer. WSCLGanonymous readerReport 2013-09-07 22:23:46Take your time, break it up, use paragraphs.
