Keep it up!«1» Or you can switch into the body of one ofn the girls.READERReport 2005-10-09 02:20:22Fuck you Miker! Xnxx sex 1/10READERReport 2005-10-09 15:58:48Miker’s an ass, don’t listen to that little fuck. I fucking loved it! Keep it up!«1» You can work into the omniscient and show the scene, then revert to his angle. 1/10READERReport 2005-10-09 15:58:48Miker’s an ass, don’t listen to that little fuck. You can work into the omniscient and show the scene, then revert to his angle. Well done, make it longer. You also don’t have to describe merely what he can see. Keep it up!«1» I fucking loved it! Give more detail..More of his emotions about it. I got to school for literature and writing and he insults some of the best work. Well done, make it longer. You can work into the omniscient and show the scene, then revert to his angle. 5 comments«1»READERReport 2006-01-22 23:17:16SEQUEL!!!READERReport 2005-10-11 11:08:58well, thank u for commenting,
and @ yoyoyo, i’ve given me quite an idea, ill try and write something like that, have to talk to ‘cherie’ bout that :)READERReport 2005-10-10 00:15:53It was a piece of shit. You also don’t have to describe merely what he can see. You can work into the omniscient and show the scene, then revert to his angle.
