the wall of text. the wall of text. Xnxx com Usually I’d tell you, “Loved your stories, keep up the great work!” But… This is the biggest complaint on this site… the wall of text. the wall of text. and a blank line between them. Maybe you could edit your stories to get the paragraph breaks in where they need to be. Usually I’d tell you, “Loved your stories, keep up the great work!” But… Spelling, poor grammar, etc., I can live with. This is the biggest complaint on this site… and a blank line between them. But seriously, paragraphs… and a blank line between them. This is the biggest complaint on this site… But seriously, paragraphs… the wall of text. I can’t, because I didn’t read them.Anonymous readerReport 2014-08-07 00:58:37no paragraphs = FAIL
no editing = FAIL
piss poor writing = FAIL
all in all a total waste of your time our time and the sites space get smart and delete all your stories and never post here again.anonymous readerReport 2013-10-19 14:41:57you made a mistake cunt you put allison for ass twice so complete and total bullshitanonymous readerReport 2010-11-29 22:13:57that was fucking awsome me and my sister just fucked the hell out of my cousin katy talk bout an orgyanonymous readerReport 2010-11-29 22:13:51that was fucking awsome
