52 comments«12345»Anonymous readerReport 2014-08-03 00:04:55poor writing poor editing and no end all add up to a waste of time.anonymous readerReport 2013-01-25 16:21:36needs a good editing and the writer needs to learn where the hymen is. Xnxx video 52 comments«12345»Anonymous readerReport 2014-08-03 00:04:55poor writing poor editing and no end all add up to a waste of time.anonymous readerReport 2013-01-25 16:21:36needs a good editing and the writer needs to learn where the hymen is. the hymen covers the opening of the vagina it is not several inches inside. Which is odd, cause some parts were written so expertly, with wonderful word choice, and in other part John was “stairing” at his friends. I chalk it up typo, but check for them next time. typical underage male virgin writeranonymous readerReport 2011-09-27 23:44:02Yo Mann where the 2nd be at?Anonymous readerReport 2010-07-03 04:39:58Great story, but there were quite a few simple errors in grammer. typical underage male virgin writeranonymous readerReport 2011-09-27 23:44:02Yo Mann where the 2nd be at?Anonymous readerReport 2010-07-03 04:39:58Great story, but there were quite a few simple errors in grammer.
