Expand your skills and keep writing.DragonheartReport 2008-10-01 18:31:44″The cloudless sun beat down unmerciful on the somber gathered contingency”
“fresh dug plot”
“No no, he had no intention..”
“plowed her slit with gusto”
“strawberry tipped tits? The ones ending in “ly” should be limiter even more than the others. Xnxx Dump those damned exclamation marks! Expand your skills and keep writing.DragonheartReport 2008-10-01 18:31:44″The cloudless sun beat down unmerciful on the somber gathered contingency”
“fresh dug plot”
“No no, he had no intention..”
“plowed her slit with gusto”
“strawberry tipped tits? You will impress more people with your story telling abilities if you dump the turgid prose of yesteryear and work with colloquila English, American flavored. One last thought. You have made the same mistake so many of us make when we begin to write. ARE YOU SERIOUS???? In writing the exclamation mark denotes yelling, screaming and the intense emotions accompanying them. Limit the use of adverbs as well. Ponderous.wordytomReport 2008-10-01 18:56:11I am not going to be nice to you.
