Seriously the only reason it’s gettin’ such low rating marks, is it’s so totally screwed up grammar wise.anonymous readerReport 2011-11-15 10:05:28Your writing sucks. I’ve got no complaints on the story line by itself. Sex xnxx IF ONLY it were laid out differently. Find someone you trust to help you with how to lay out your paragraphs, and the prospective view of ”him, her, their, ours, we, etc. IF only there was a way to get in touch with you and have you send me the story, let me make corrections, then send it back to you. I go along with all the other people that are not happy with your grammar. I’d really hate to see this story end before it had a chance to be a really good story. I go along with all the other people that are not happy with your grammar. IF only there was a way to get in touch with you and have you send me the story, let me make corrections, then send it back to you.
