The idea of the story is good, and I applaud anyone willing to complete a story that has stopped before it was finished, but in my opinion it needs a lot of work to live up to its potential. 3 comments«1»OvidReport 2010-05-09 09:21:40I don’t see the point of the fundamental changes in everyone’s characters; Dumbledore and Harry don’t view each other as equals (largely because they are not), Petunia is incredibly prudish and therefore unlikely to slip off for a little lesbian fun (with a witch, who she despises) especially with her husband at the same table, Dudley and Vernon should be bouncing between terror and rage. Sex xnxx thank you«1» That is before we move on to the writing, it is almost devoid of adjectives, and the descriptive writing (such as it is) is very pedestrian. i love these stories and the other guy just kinda stopped half way thru. thank you«1» thank you«1» thank you«1»
