Recommend you spellcheck and proofread this story and repost it.anonymous readerReport 2012-06-01 10:49:12While the story’s plot is fine, the grammar and the writing quality is very poor. 10 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2012-08-05 13:06:45Storyline was good but the quality of the story was poor due to the poor grammar. Sex xnxx Recommend you spellcheck and proofread this story and repost it.anonymous readerReport 2012-06-01 10:49:12While the story’s plot is fine, the grammar and the writing quality is very poor. If that’s true, give credit where it is due; do not attempt to take credit for a story written by someone else.anonymous readerReport 2012-05-07 17:38:08I think most people on here are full of shit.anonymous readerReport 2012-03-08 19:30:34Who is Pauly and where did he come from and where did he goanonymous readerReport 2012-02-25 09:57:35this story is ripped from family vegas trip«12» 10 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2012-08-05 13:06:45Storyline was good but the quality of the story was poor due to the poor grammar. Also, I see some people are claiming that you “stole” this story.
