(‘I’d’ is a contraction of ‘I had’)
Once you get used to recognising the past perfect, be careful not to slip in and out of it by accident. Past perfect gets awkward fast, so if you want to do a lengthy flashback it’s best to use some other devices to indicate it. Xnxx I’ll be back soon with an essay on the ethics of all this shit, and a fair while later with an extremely nasty slow-burn psychological story. However, now consider:
“Shelly was excited to see her friends’ reactions as she carried her new acquisition into the restaurant: a beautiful Japanese koi carp. You’ll soon realise that things weren’t so bad before you did that”. Thanks POV! When two women or two men go at it you end up with problems. Be very careful about nesting flashbacks within flashbacks; that way lies madness, especially if you’re using tenses as your primary way of indicating the order things happened in.Character POV
Most readers tend to identify with one character at a time, and most stories are written to help them with that. The line “As Karen and Elizabeth’s passion grew, she slipped her hand into her pussy” for instance, could mean one of eight different things depending on who ‘she’ and the
