A spell check run would have caught many errors. Xnxx sex Detail matters. But still like I said, a great story 10/10«1» Def would have hurt you.Anonymous readerReport 2010-06-26 06:07:11Please proof your story. And I agree with the other comment about being a virgin thing. A spell check run would have caught many errors. There was no flow to the story. And I agree with the other comment about being a virgin thing. A spell check run would have caught many errors. 3 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2010-09-06 11:10:21It would have been an alright story line if u knew how to write properly. And I agree with the other comment about being a virgin thing. But still like I said, a great story 10/10«1» With not much detail. A spell check run would have caught many errors. It was a little short & didn’t have much detail but all around a great story. And I agree with the other comment about being a virgin thing. It was a little short & didn’t have much detail but all around a great story. But still like I said, a great story 10/10«1» You should definitely make a part two. It was a little short & didn’t have much detail but all around a great story.
