The grammar was good and the punctuation was good, too. Xnxx this is a good story«123» Well, anyway, WAY BETTER in the English Lit department. Got yourself a proofreader? jk. Story #2 was just as GOOD as the first. this is a good story«123» this is a good story«123» 13 comments«123»Anonymous readerReport 2015-01-03 22:01:31The story looks like its unfinished…but good story tho!Anonymous readerReport 2010-03-27 11:52:23HEY! Story #2 was just as GOOD as the first. Well, anyway, WAY BETTER in the English Lit department. Well, anyway, WAY BETTER in the English Lit department. The grammar was good and the punctuation was good, too. Maybe by blackmailing her not to rat her out in exchange for a life of servitude or something like that.Anonymous readerReport 2008-05-28 12:56:19u suck… You did GREAT! prt 1 was great!Anonymous readerReport 2008-09-24 16:18:38Personally I would have liked it more if she had been able to travel back home and get revenge on her sister. this is a good story«123» Maybe by blackmailing her not to rat her out in exchange for a life of servitude or something like that.Anonymous readerReport 2008-05-28 12:56:19u suck… prt 1 was great!Anonymous readerReport 2008-09-24 16:18:38Personally I would have liked it more if she had been able to travel back home and get revenge on her sister.
