Don’t mind the critics , thay can’t do half as good. Don’t mind the critics , thay can’t do half as good. Xnxx more chapters please.READERReport 2007-02-11 23:09:19sexyREADERReport 2007-02-09 02:03:42Keep it going I cant wait for more,READERReport 2007-02-07 19:39:53Good story, can’t wait for the next chapter. more chapters please.READERReport 2007-02-11 23:09:19sexyREADERReport 2007-02-09 02:03:42Keep it going I cant wait for more,READERReport 2007-02-07 19:39:53Good story, can’t wait for the next chapter. Don’t mind the critics , thay can’t do half as good. other then that i really want to know whats gonna happen next«12» more chapters please.READERReport 2007-02-11 23:09:19sexyREADERReport 2007-02-09 02:03:42Keep it going I cant wait for more,READERReport 2007-02-07 19:39:53Good story, can’t wait for the next chapter. 8 comments«12»READERReport 2008-04-14 02:51:32Good job. 8 comments«12»READERReport 2008-04-14 02:51:32Good job. hope to read more from you soon. other then that i really want to know whats gonna happen next«12» other then that i really want to know whats gonna happen next«12» hope to read more from you soon. hope to read more from you soon. If you get your spelling right, and even more important, break up your paragraphs a whole lot more, you will have a winnerREADERReport 2007-02-07 17:11:08sounds good man but run it through a spell check, grammer check, and try and do somethin about punctuation and run-ons.
