Your use of language and spelling are so bad that it makes reading it quite painful to me. Xnxx com please fix it and repost once corrected so can be enjoyed.«12» 8 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2013-06-15 12:57:58Spell checker would definitly help also checking grammaranonymous readerReport 2013-06-13 09:17:22I’m sure I would have liked your story if I could read it. 8 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2013-06-15 12:57:58Spell checker would definitly help also checking grammaranonymous readerReport 2013-06-13 09:17:22I’m sure I would have liked your story if I could read it. please fix it and repost once corrected so can be enjoyed.«12» You just need a proofreader in my opinion.anonymous readerReport 2013-06-13 06:48:44holy shit, sounded great to me at the beginning, near the end I couldn’t stand trying to make sense of it please revise this, or at least make the 2nd chapter tons better than this one because I couldn’t make heads or tales of the story near the endanonymous readerReport 2013-06-13 03:07:42looked like great start to a series however it was soo hard to read, angel to angle, smock as smoke, and soo many others cant read it… 8 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2013-06-15 12:57:58Spell checker would definitly help also checking grammaranonymous readerReport 2013-06-13 09:17:22I’m sure I would have liked your story if I could read it.
