Keep it up now, the writing also. But don’t stop or listen to negativity .«12» How about getting a real dungeon going for your sluts to be abused in and sold for the use of other men who know how young sluts should be used and tortured.anonymous readerReport 2011-05-12 03:50:35Not bad but u didn’t have to rewrite the first part. Xnxx tv I would really love to murder you you fucking faggot i would slice your throught and laugh at you gargling your blood as you dieanonymous readerReport 2013-09-17 17:23:46This story is going good but it would be cool if you got some underage girls and force them to fuck each other, maybe some hardcore penetrationanonymous readerReport 2011-05-13 20:38:15he shououlooid boe youanonymous readerReport 2011-05-13 04:25:13Mr7reg. As I stated in my other comment you need to but more rough sex and a lot more hard torture of the little young sluts, the younger the better get some underage bitches in on this fun to. Good to see your using paragraphs in this one, no need to start at the beginning though. How about getting a real dungeon going for your sluts to be abused in and sold for the use of other men who know how young sluts should be used and tortured.anonymous readerReport 2011-05-12 03:50:35Not
