Great story, just needs a little help being more readable.mr longfelloReport 2017-08-11 20:21:23Hot storyAnonymous readerReport 2016-07-19 13:55:33oh!..my god…that was fucking cool..I cum two times already.«1234» Your grammar and punctuation could definitely use some work, though. Xnxx You kept switching between past-tense and present-tense and most sentences weren’t correctly punctuated. looking forward to part 3Witchy WomanReport 2018-01-14 05:19:43Great story. It’s only important because it makes it a little more difficult to read. Great story, just needs a little help being more readable.mr longfelloReport 2017-08-11 20:21:23Hot storyAnonymous readerReport 2016-07-19 13:55:33oh!..my god…that was fucking cool..I cum two times already.«1234» I suggest having someone you know has proper grammar and punctuation proof-read it, but if you aren’t down for that, have someone teach you with a different text or look up ways to improve. Your grammar and punctuation could definitely use some work, though. You kept switching between past-tense and present-tense and most sentences weren’t correctly punctuated. I suggest having someone you know has proper grammar and punctuation proof-read it, but if you aren’t down for that, have someone teach you with a different text or look up ways to improve.
