This story did nothing for me. I agree with those people… Sex xnxx People who don’t edit their stories before posting them are assuming that their audience are as moronic and sloppy as what they are. 3/10 only because you wrote a story and were able to separate your thoughts into paragraphs. it was short and the plot barely exists at all. A story is supposed to create a picture, until you barely realize you’re reading anymore and you feel like you’re there, watching what’s going on. I agree with those people… The poor form relegates this story to ash heap of shitty porn stories.READERReport 2004-07-16 04:38:29i think that that story was a bit too forward and un-natural, and yeah, i agree, needs more deatil.READERReport 2004-07-15 17:22:23I thought this story was OK. 4 comments«1»READERReport 2004-07-17 23:39:27Where is the elaboration? I agree with those people… A story is supposed to create a picture, until you barely realize you’re reading anymore and you feel like you’re there, watching what’s going on. A story is supposed to create a picture, until you barely realize you’re reading anymore and you feel like you’re there, watching what’s going on.
