Again, description is a little better, grammar is still absolutely terrible, and I have no idea what the character, who I’m guessing is Ellen, looks like. I also liked your reference of Sasuke, which I’m guessing your referring to Sasuke Uchiha from the anime series Naruto. Xnxx sex Also please go into a bit more detail about his passed, what made his family resent him so bad, and treat him the way they did. We as readers can not see what you have in your head, so as a writer it is your job to make us see it by describing what you see. I also liked your reference of Sasuke, which I’m guessing your referring to Sasuke Uchiha from the anime series Naruto. Again, description is a little better, grammar is still absolutely terrible, and I have no idea what the character, who I’m guessing is Ellen, looks like. 8 comments«12»AnnistaysiaReport 2014-12-17 06:53:55I reread my previous comment and decided to post another to elaborate on something’s a little further.
