Needs proper grammar and fiction format, particularly dialogue. though it is a good storie(juded by how well its written, not by content)anonymous readerReport 2012-01-13 17:57:48Quite a different type of story…but good. Xnxx Will make for easier reading.anonymous readerReport 2012-01-13 22:16:11a note on Qaddafi: some poeple in Iraq did that after a public exicution I believe… 4 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2012-01-17 00:15:50Interesting twist to the story,cant wait to fead the 2nd installment.chocolat_eclairReport 2012-01-14 19:07:34Good story. 4 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2012-01-17 00:15:50Interesting twist to the story,cant wait to fead the 2nd installment.chocolat_eclairReport 2012-01-14 19:07:34Good story. Will make for easier reading.anonymous readerReport 2012-01-13 22:16:11a note on Qaddafi: some poeple in Iraq did that after a public exicution I believe… Will make for easier reading.anonymous readerReport 2012-01-13 22:16:11a note on Qaddafi: some poeple in Iraq did that after a public exicution I believe… ‘Thought’ should read ‘Throat’. . . … ‘Corse’ should read ‘coarse’ and there were one or two others, but it’s still good. Don’t know what the bulk of America will think if they are shocked at soldiers pissing on dead bodies. …I’ve seen heads on stakes and genitals mutilated. . . . …and wasn’t Qaddafi’s dead body buggered ????«1» ‘Thought’ should read ‘Throat’. . . …
