you need to go back to grade school and LEARN to write properly.Anonymous readerReport 2014-07-06 22:01:30needs a GOOD WRITER and needs smaller paragraphs.anonymous readerReport 2013-06-08 02:01:11enjoyed ur story n its coming on wonderfully but dont 4get proofreading otherwise all is gud…luv it n dont make us wait too long 4 another charpter*cantwait*anonymous readerReport 2013-06-08 00:17:35All I’ve got to say is… Xnxx sex you need to go back to grade school and LEARN to write properly.Anonymous readerReport 2014-07-06 22:01:30needs a GOOD WRITER and needs smaller paragraphs.anonymous readerReport 2013-06-08 02:01:11enjoyed ur story n its coming on wonderfully but dont 4get proofreading otherwise all is gud…luv it n dont make us wait too long 4 another charpter*cantwait*anonymous readerReport 2013-06-08 00:17:35All I’ve got to say is… 4 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2014-07-06 22:18:41remove all stories and find a GOOD WRITER to rewrite them. Why do people post without proofreading? The glaringly obvious mistakes detract froman otherwise enjoyable read.«1» proofread! The glaringly obvious mistakes detract froman otherwise enjoyable read.«1» you need to go back to grade school and LEARN to write properly.Anonymous readerReport 2014-07-06 22:01:30needs a GOOD WRITER and needs smaller paragraphs.anonymous readerReport 2013-06-08 02:01:11enjoyed ur story n its coming on wonderfully but dont 4get proofreading otherwise all is gud…luv it n dont make us wait too long 4 another charpter*cantwait*anonymous readerReport 2013-06-08 00:17:35All I’ve got to
