Since its grammatical errors is the issues, that is fixable. Xnxx remove all the greek names it is to confusing.anonymous readerReport 2012-11-12 17:16:11For those you are complaining, I will write again and proofread my stuff. remove all the greek names it is to confusing.anonymous readerReport 2012-11-12 17:16:11For those you are complaining, I will write again and proofread my stuff. remove all the greek names it is to confusing.anonymous readerReport 2012-11-12 17:16:11For those you are complaining, I will write again and proofread my stuff. I should be able to turn another part soon.anonymous readerReport 2012-10-23 19:35:26This is utter and complete shit, yet you decided to write another story after this. That story sucked ass as well, take the hint and please, next time you decide to write take a hammer and smash every one of your fingers!!! For people like reader JJ than I will write again. Since its grammatical errors is the issues, that is fixable. If you don’t like find somewhere else, but if you can let me try and improve you may be surprised. 9 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2015-01-12 11:58:05Achilles &Briseis Faranonymous readerReport 2013-02-08 21:43:09needs a total rewrite by a GOOD WRITER that knows enough to use a GOOD EDITOR.
