Get yourself an editor.anonymous readerReport 2013-02-18 05:01:06I was enjoying it until it got to the part about her parents passing out. But you need to clean it up and resubmit it. Xnxx tv And the paragraphs repeating is really annoyinganonymous readerReport 2012-02-08 17:01:57No, No, No, No, No, No!anonymous readerReport 2011-02-06 22:06:24The story itself was pretty good. That’s just disgusting. Get yourself an editor.anonymous readerReport 2013-02-18 05:01:06I was enjoying it until it got to the part about her parents passing out. And the paragraphs repeating is really annoyinganonymous readerReport 2012-02-08 17:01:57No, No, No, No, No, No!anonymous readerReport 2011-02-06 22:06:24The story itself was pretty good. I stopped right there and couldn’t keep reading. The constant repeating of the same paragraphs randomly, and the atrocious use of question marks for apostrophes was very distracting. The constant repeating of the same paragraphs randomly, and the atrocious use of question marks for apostrophes was very distracting. I enjoyed it. And the paragraphs repeating is really annoyinganonymous readerReport 2012-02-08 17:01:57No, No, No, No, No, No!anonymous readerReport 2011-02-06 22:06:24The story itself was pretty good. Get yourself an editor.anonymous readerReport 2013-02-18 05:01:06I was enjoying it until it got to the part about her parents passing out. I enjoyed it. SEE?Anonymous readerReport 2014-02-17 17:34:39The story itself has potential.
