Haven’t you ever heard of proof-reading BEFORE submitting your story? Both were often used incorrectly. Xnxx video Thank’s !! (countrycadillac)anonymous readerReport 2013-09-19 12:19:13I enjoyed your story even though it contained many misspelled words. Haven’t you ever heard of proof-reading BEFORE submitting your story? (countrycadillac)anonymous readerReport 2013-09-19 12:19:13I enjoyed your story even though it contained many misspelled words. Thank’s !! You should also learn how to correctly use quotation marks and apostrophes. It would have been so much better if you could spell better or at least knew a literate friend who would proof-read your story and correct the errors. 3 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2015-06-15 16:52:19That was a wonderful storyAnonymous readerReport 2013-09-19 16:06:38Very hot and FUN story. With a little more attention to detail, your story would be very good.«1» You should also learn how to correctly use quotation marks and apostrophes. Thank’s !! Both were often used incorrectly. You did a fine job, please continue on with more chapters with one or more of the four ladies as the main chick !!! Both were often used incorrectly. (countrycadillac)anonymous readerReport 2013-09-19 12:19:13I enjoyed your story even though it contained many misspelled words. 3 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2015-06-15 16:52:19That was a wonderful storyAnonymous readerReport 2013-09-19 16:06:38Very hot and FUN story. (countrycadillac)anonymous readerReport 2013-09-19 12:19:13I enjoyed your story even though it contained many
