If this is fun and practised, I could only imagine your story if you’re serious and commited. Also the story is being told from the first person so some of the issues are the characters, this is why I never go into the thoughts of other characters. Xnxx com This particular tale came to me right before I started to write it, and I’m letting the story flow and direct itself instead of forcing it. No not just good but excellent. As for the Grammar issues, not all but some of them are intended. Under the hand of pure amateur, the avatar and seeking would have become rubbish. The way you explain avatar and journey of seeking was good. This particular tale came to me right before I started to write it, and I’m letting the story flow and direct itself instead of forcing it. Its because of such problems that I am just an avid reader only.«12» As for the Grammar issues, not all but some of them are intended. Thank you again for reading and keep the feedback coming.anonymous readerReport 2012-08-10 05:52:08Are you sure you’re just writing this for practise and fun? What application are you currently using?
