KUDOS!!! Xnxx I got so wet.Anonymous readerReport 2010-06-01 21:52:37So damn hot. It is a great story but please do a grammar check and read some books on writing techniques for short stories.., All in all, its a 9 on storyline and a 3 on grammar. (exaggerating a bit) I hope your next part is better.anonymous readerReport 2011-11-23 05:42:13Fuck yes , luv the brutetality , take what u want . (exaggerating a bit) I hope your next part is better.anonymous readerReport 2011-11-23 05:42:13Fuck yes , luv the brutetality , take what u want . And I’m starting to think the quality of writing only adds to that. And I’m starting to think the quality of writing only adds to that. I’m not here for literature, and you deliver exactly what I am here for.«1234» I agree with others your w riting is bad. It is a great story but please do a grammar check and read some books on writing techniques for short stories.., All in all, its a 9 on storyline and a 3 on grammar. I agree with others your w riting is bad. (exaggerating a bit) I hope your next part is better.anonymous readerReport 2011-11-23 05:42:13Fuck yes , luv the brutetality , take what u want .
