ProofReading is when you read it over and over again, looking for mistakes or things you could have said or written in a better way. You had some good ideas when you wrote this story and your part 2… Xnxx hd You had some good ideas when you wrote this story and your part 2… and they will LOVE Your stories!«123» your mistakes would have been easily caught by you if you had read it over and over again. You had some good ideas when you wrote this story and your part 2… Will read on…anonymous readerReport 2013-08-10 23:21:06good story.. proofread your stories more so other people will only see a Great Story that has no mistakes… ProofReading is when you read it over and over again, looking for mistakes or things you could have said or written in a better way. had me interested in reading more! Will read on…anonymous readerReport 2013-08-10 23:21:06good story.. and they will LOVE Your stories!«123» and they will LOVE Your stories!«123» You had some good ideas when you wrote this story and your part 2… proofread your stories more so other people will only see a Great Story that has no mistakes…
