Though i did get lost a few times along the way i believe this was to do with the lack of detail and description of there settings. WordytomvtsReport 2008-10-26 06:29:19great story, more please«1» I write and sell a few stories. Xnxx The “D” was pure hoke. I write and sell a few stories. WordytomvtsReport 2008-10-26 06:29:19great story, more please«1» 3 s«1»aceofhartsReport 2008-10-27 07:55:27Excellent story!!!!! Though i did get lost a few times along the way i believe this was to do with the lack of detail and description of there settings. If yours was crap I would have moved on and not bothered. I apologize if I insult you, but I feel you have potential. WordytomvtsReport 2008-10-26 06:29:19great story, more please«1» The “D” was pure hoke. good effert 9/10wordytomReport 2008-10-26 17:15:47Too gimicky. Right now you are trying to be clever. a simple story line whould have worked much better. Though i did get lost a few times along the way i believe this was to do with the lack of detail and description of there settings. If yours was crap I would have moved on and not bothered. I write and sell a few stories. I also agree with wordytom… I apologize if I insult you, but I feel you have potential.
