ishot in my pants 😛 ï hãd ßêëň rèädîñg för Ã¥ ßît thðûgh.Report 2010-07-21 18:22:06hells no, keep doing as you do. 16 s«1234»anonymous readerReport 2013-01-21 21:57:54needs a total rewrite adding paragraphs and using a good editor before reposting as is it sucks big time and not in a good wayanonymous readerReport 2013-01-06 10:17:30first I then i then ann :-/ good work anyway. Xnxx hd Please don’t let her get pregnant, that ruins a good story and it’s not a secret anymore. . . . . …Report 2009-10-04 18:05:08good start…i agree about the switching between the 1st & 3rd person…you should also be a little more descriptive with what they are doing to each other…makes a story go a long way…but i liked it…got me a little wet thank you!«1234» you might wanna put a bit more caution to spelling and grammer, O nd more detial tooTedReport 2010-04-22 13:27:26Yes, good story, stay in 1st and 2nd person, but be sure to write part #2. Sounds like both characters will enjoy and have many more hook ups. Sounds like both characters will enjoy and have many more hook ups. Sounds like both characters will enjoy and have many more hook ups.
