Please continue this is going to be amazing!«12» 6 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2013-06-29 08:55:31Well done, thanks! You got me a bit confused in the middle and you weren’t very creative with the character descriptions. Xnxx Please continue this is going to be amazing!«12» Tell us about his eyes, his lips, skin tone, be vivid when describing. good story :)anonymous readerReport 2013-05-18 10:23:29That was a great beginning to a great story! Please continue this is going to be amazing!«12» You got me a bit confused in the middle and you weren’t very creative with the character descriptions. good story :)anonymous readerReport 2013-05-18 10:23:29That was a great beginning to a great story! You got me a bit confused in the middle and you weren’t very creative with the character descriptions. 6 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2013-06-29 08:55:31Well done, thanks! Please continue this is going to be amazing!«12» Please tell us more about Greg and Lukas!anonymous readerReport 2013-05-22 11:11:37This pstiong knocked my socks offanonymous readerReport 2013-05-18 20:21:53it wont let me continue, i wrote the next part, and it shut down my accountanonymous readerReport 2013-05-18 18:13:02HA GAAAAAAY!
