Glad it was special for you both. 10 comments«12»READERReport 2006-10-12 22:57:10Now what is it about a good slow fuck between consenting teens that just sounds like it is O.K. Xnxx video Glad it was special for you both. No blow job. No blow job. They went back into the tent, how did they end up on the grass. I dont believe this is a true story. You put a lot of effort into a story, make it count. Keep writing Hannah.«12» Also, you need to break the paragraph each time you add dialogue or change speakers. to paraphrase St Bobo, erotica is pretty straight forward, its all about setting, characters, and descriptions. Glad it was special for you both. 1/10READERReport 2005-09-07 09:13:23Hannah, you have a pretty good geasp of the language but the inconsistancies hurt the story. You put a lot of effort into a story, make it count. What do they look like, what color is the tent, are they in the mountains of Tennessee, or the Texas hill country, give us something to see.
