Read some books so that you can see just how a story should be written. Better proof reading would greatly enhance this story. Xnxx hd It’s also a cliff hanger which I personally don’t like. When you’re confident that your story is as good as it’s going to get, post it. Yes, you can go look that word up, too.anonymous readerReport 2013-08-21 22:45:08That’s strange you call yourself a “Redneck” yet you use Spanish, albeit quite poorly. Good Luck.anonymous readerReport 2013-12-08 12:51:06I look forward to reading part 2anonymous readerReport 2013-08-31 03:52:09One of the most eloquent burns I’ve seen on this site. You’re dumber than a third grade retard and hornier than three peckered billy goat. However, it’s your story and you can do as you please with it. You’re dumber than a third grade retard and hornier than three peckered billy goat. However, it’s your story and you can do as you please with it. There should be a very noticeable difference. Yes, you can go look that word up, too.anonymous readerReport 2013-08-21 22:45:08That’s strange you call yourself a “Redneck” yet you use Spanish, albeit quite poorly.
