Barbie and Little Red Riding Hood are at your local library; So FUCK OFF. so GO DIE SLOWLY AND PAINFULLY.darthel0101Report 2013-04-22 06:04:56a couple of comments
– you need to have paragraphs : a wall of words will cause people to simply leave as soon as they arrive. Xnxx tv Now as to the story: Concept Good but you need a proof reader and learn to use paragraphs and punctuation correctly.anonymous readerReport 2013-04-22 13:19:45YOU ARE A FUCKING ASSHOLE, and I hope you get captured and raped repeatedly since you seem to find it so entertaining. Try and work on spacing text out, and paragraphs. There you can talk to amateur women who look like your neighbor. Barbie and Little Red Riding Hood are at your local library; So FUCK OFF. Have fun :)anonymous readerReport 2013-05-12 01:37:21The wall of un paragraphed text certainly set a bad vibe, but the story certainly interests me so far. so GO DIE SLOWLY AND PAINFULLY.darthel0101Report 2013-04-22 06:04:56a couple of comments
– you need to have paragraphs : a wall of words will cause people to simply leave as soon as they arrive. – you need a little bit more length to the story : this one has not even finished the initial encounter«1» so GO DIE SLOWLY AND PAINFULLY.darthel0101Report 2013-04-22 06:04:56a couple of
