3 s«1»Report 2016-06-26 16:59:50I’ve gotten off on all eight of these chapters. I don’t mean merely “I felt great” but something more descriptive, like “She relaxed her tongue and ran its velvety surface all over my shaft, with long gentle licks; then she started twirling her tongue around my knob. Xnxx video Some sensory description would help: the sight, smell, texture, taste of people’s bodies, and the way that the individuals actually feel when acts are being performed on them. I groaned with pleasure, and she gently took my whole cock in her mouth, sucking hungrily until my balls tensed up and…” — something that really reminds the reader of the intensely pleasurable sensations and does so in a real-time sentence.Report 2009-04-15 20:45:06Excellent story.«1» I groaned with pleasure, and she gently took my whole cock in her mouth, sucking hungrily until my balls tensed up and…” — something that really reminds the reader of the intensely pleasurable sensations and does so in a real-time sentence.Report 2009-04-15 20:45:06Excellent story.«1» I can’t wait to read the last one.Report 2009-04-19 16:55:45Your ideas are good, but the prose itself is unsexy/borderline boring.
