I have read other stories here, written by people that was supposed to know the English language, and some of them were worse and harder to read than yours. Nice storyAnonymous readerReport 2012-10-31 00:09:37Hello Stranger92 (This is the second part to my comment)
You did a great job of dividing your story into correct paragraphs, which makes it a lot easier to read. Xnxx video It is a fantastic story. I had more problems reading some of the comments that some people have made here about your story, then I did reading your story.gymgirlReport 2012-10-29 17:54:55Haha great story! Listen to the comment made by Gymgirl. Listen to the comment made by Gymgirl. I love a good romantic story that has a happy ending and yours sure did. I don’t agree with other comments, your language is fine.«1234» I don’t agree with other comments, your language is fine.«1234» HopefullAuthorHopefullAuthorReport 2012-10-30 23:58:13Hello Stranger92
I just finished reading your story, and I want to say that I loved it. I was enjoying the story so much it made me sad to reach that point.
