Story #2 was just as GOOD as the first. Maybe by blackmailing her not to rat her out in exchange for a life of servitude or something like that.Report 2008-05-28 12:56:19u suck… Xnxx Got yourself a proofreader? Got yourself a proofreader? The grammar was good and the punctuation was good, too. Story #2 was just as GOOD as the first. You did GREAT! PLEASE KEEP WRITING, YOUR STORIES ARE GOOD.purbratReport 2010-03-23 02:43:17I enjoyed this story! 13 s«123»Report 2015-01-03 22:01:31The story looks like its unfinished…but good story tho!Report 2010-03-27 11:52:23HEY! PLEASE KEEP WRITING, YOUR STORIES ARE GOOD.purbratReport 2010-03-23 02:43:17I enjoyed this story! Got yourself a proofreader? Got yourself a proofreader? Maybe by blackmailing her not to rat her out in exchange for a life of servitude or something like that.Report 2008-05-28 12:56:19u suck… Got yourself a proofreader? PLEASE KEEP WRITING, YOUR STORIES ARE GOOD.purbratReport 2010-03-23 02:43:17I enjoyed this story! this is a good story«123» this is a good story«123» prt 1 was great!Report 2008-09-24 16:18:38Personally I would have liked it more if she had been able to travel back home and get revenge on her sister.
