3 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2016-10-05 08:11:14Keep writing…to hell with the haters-Wild BillAnonymous readerReport 2014-06-25 03:21:56fucked up the first line the rest can’t be any good delete all stories and stop writing. Xnxx porn you couldn’t write a good story if your life depended on it.anonymous readerReport 2013-10-31 00:18:21As usual with a lot of your stories I got lost trying to figure out what is going on as each line seems to randomly jump around aimlessly. Unless you really are leaving out large chunks of each sentence, in which case no wonder them seem random and are hard to follow.«1» I’m also always confused why you always use “. . …” at the beginning and end of each line? you couldn’t write a good story if your life depended on it.anonymous readerReport 2013-10-31 00:18:21As usual with a lot of your stories I got lost trying to figure out what is going on as each line seems to randomly jump around aimlessly. I’m also always confused why you always use “. . …” at the beginning and end of each line?
