ur story sucksREADERReport 2007-10-07 23:00:04dude u fucking suckREADERReport 2007-02-03 21:59:24story was fine, it would help iff you had a proof reader to fix the fuck ups. how do i put this nicely… Xnxx ur story sucksREADERReport 2007-10-07 23:00:04dude u fucking suckREADERReport 2007-02-03 21:59:24story was fine, it would help iff you had a proof reader to fix the fuck ups. decent story i suppose, but i really do have to agree with the sum of the above s; you really need to proof read your stories. keep on writingREADERReport 2006-10-14 18:04:51I don’t know what is true and what is fantasy,at least
it is not a father/daughter a sister thing or a uncle/niece fuck job. decent story i suppose, but i really do have to agree with the sum of the above s; you really need to proof read your stories. keep on writingREADERReport 2006-10-14 18:04:51I don’t know what is true and what is fantasy,at least
it is not a father/daughter a sister thing or a uncle/niece fuck job. Igave you a 5/10«12» ur story sucksREADERReport 2007-10-07 23:00:04dude u fucking suckREADERReport 2007-02-03 21:59:24story was fine, it would help iff you had a proof reader to fix the fuck ups.
