=Dreamer=READERReport 2006-03-04 23:38:38complete crap«12» Details are good, but they have to be the right details. Xnxx hd =Dreamer=READERReport 2006-03-04 23:38:38complete crap«12» =Dreamer=READERReport 2006-03-04 23:38:38complete crap«12» Please learn how to use commas. 7 s«12»anonymous readerReport 2011-12-19 22:50:00totally unrealistic its just to fake guess what im only 10 lolREADERReport 2006-03-28 18:38:28ok storyREADERReport 2006-03-28 18:37:08good story but needs more relistismREADERReport 2006-03-05 07:13:56This may be your first time writing a porn story, but it looks like it was your first time writing anything ever. =Dreamer=READERReport 2006-03-04 23:38:38complete crap«12» Details are good, but they have to be the right details. People don’t just go around fingering their friends; if they have a special relationship, we really need to know about it for this to make sense. I don’t understand your obsession with brand names. People don’t just go around fingering their friends; if they have a special relationship, we really need to know about it for this to make sense. You really need to write more about the characters, not just their clothes. it was almost painful to read. it was almost painful to read. Do you know how much those things cost? You really need to write more about the characters, not just their clothes.
