Thivai can’t even spell his own complaint.READERReport 2004-09-07 19:02:17terrible writing. bad spelling, wrong words being used. Xnxx hd My spell checker comes says the story is fine.READERReport 2005-02-01 08:14:19Good story, really weird. bad spelling, wrong words being used. Thivai is full of shit. inane plot. terrible. horrid characters. My spell checker comes says the story is fine.READERReport 2005-02-01 08:14:19Good story, really weird. My spell checker comes says the story is fine.READERReport 2005-02-01 08:14:19Good story, really weird. inane plot. My spell checker comes says the story is fine.READERReport 2005-02-01 08:14:19Good story, really weird. again, just terrible.READERReport 2004-04-07 00:42:48Wow, really good combination of sci fi and porn, i love it, i want more.READERReport 2004-04-04 17:09:10oh my god. horrid characters. again, just terrible.READERReport 2004-04-07 00:42:48Wow, really good combination of sci fi and porn, i love it, i want more.READERReport 2004-04-04 17:09:10oh my god. My spell checker comes says the story is fine.READERReport 2005-02-01 08:14:19Good story, really weird. Thivai is full of shit. you should read more. i do nnot see how this is a sex story.it is scary.«1» i do nnot see how this is a sex story.it is scary.«1»




















