Best of luck!READERReport 2005-09-26 11:18:28Well, now we have the titmans perspective. terrible grammar; terrible sentence structure and spelling. Xnxx hd That said, it’s not a bad story–you could rewrite it by filling it out. 6 s«12»READERReport 2005-10-15 17:28:10Hey, hope you write more, you still have five days to cover. … I’m sure you can think up some great stuff. … a good quicky is good every once in a while. It ruined the story totally. Best of luck!READERReport 2005-09-26 11:18:28Well, now we have the titmans perspective. 6 s«12»READERReport 2005-10-15 17:28:10Hey, hope you write more, you still have five days to cover. … All in all an OK story, for a 16 yo.READERReport 2005-09-26 04:56:29where in the world did this “writer” learn English? keep them cummmmming.READERReport 2005-09-27 12:38:00Archaic sums it up fairly well. 6 s«12»READERReport 2005-10-15 17:28:10Hey, hope you write more, you still have five days to cover. … The language was average (please never ever say ‘love tunnel’ again), the structure was OK, the plot left a little to be desired. 6 s«12»READERReport 2005-10-15 17:28:10Hey, hope you write more, you still have five days to cover. … Where does she buy her tee-shirts, the childrens section? 6 s«12»READERReport 2005-10-15 17:28:10Hey, hope you write more, you still have five days to cover. …
