And yes, I DO teach English.anonymous readerReport 2013-03-25 00:01:24Seems like it was written in 10 minutes by a 10 yr old.anonymous readerReport 2013-03-24 20:42:01It’s just plain stupid to say that there is a unisex changing room at a public pool.«12» 10 s«12»m1990Report 2016-03-13 15:34:27Love itanimal99Report 2013-03-26 22:38:43if they can’t sign their name to a , then they’re just bullying and not offering any real help. Xnxx Not to sound like some English teacher, but it needs some fleshing out. But I agree in that it seemed too short. I liked yyour story. Mind you, most of your readers have some college education or at least a few years of being struck across their hands by an English & Grammer teacher- so they will be the first to point out your violating basic rules… It shows a plot and good story-telling skill. The “of” is completely unnecessary. The “of” is completely unnecessary. It shows a plot and good story-telling skill. Not to sound like some English teacher, but it needs some fleshing out. Unfortunately, some people labelled your story negatively after seeing a few glaring violations and seem to ignore your skill as a storyteller. …




















