Either become better or risk losing your own readers. Xnxx sex I’m just pointing all of this out to help _you_ become a better author. Ultimately, though, it’s up to you whether you want to actually listen or not. Give them the attention they deserve and try to make them the best they can be. Even though your plot is pretty good, your horrendous grammar and spelling just make the story unbearably difficult to read. The grammar issues especially will just turn off so many readers that they won’t care how good the story is. But if you keep going about your writing as you currently are, then you’ll never reach that potential. Don’t take the lazy way out and just make excuses all the time. 11 s«123»anonymous readerReport 2013-05-31 02:31:00really is deleting your account any better than being a coward?anonymous readerReport 2013-05-30 21:31:08My advice would be to not just blow off everything that I’m saying, either.




















