Don’t know what the bulk of America will think if they are shocked at soldiers pissing on dead bodies. Sex xnxx …I’ve seen heads on stakes and genitals mutilated. . . . …and wasn’t Qaddafi’s dead body buggered ????«1» ‘Corse’ should read ‘coarse’ and there were one or two others, but it’s still good. Will make for easier reading.anonymous readerReport 2012-01-13 22:16:11a note on Qaddafi: some poeple in Iraq did that after a public exicution I believe… Needs proper grammar and fiction format, particularly dialogue. ‘Thought’ should read ‘Throat’. . . … Needs proper grammar and fiction format, particularly dialogue. 4 s«1»anonymous readerReport 2012-01-17 00:15:50Interesting twist to the story,cant wait to fead the 2nd installment.chocolat_eclairReport 2012-01-14 19:07:34Good story. 4 s«1»anonymous readerReport 2012-01-17 00:15:50Interesting twist to the story,cant wait to fead the 2nd installment.chocolat_eclairReport 2012-01-14 19:07:34Good story. a note on marrines: most are more honerable than what alot of America thinks, mostley because of the media outlets doing antiwar crap(propaganda)… Needs proper grammar and fiction format, particularly dialogue. though it is a good storie(juded by how well its written, not by content)anonymous readerReport 2012-01-13 17:57:48Quite a different type of story…but good.
