10 comments«12»m1990Report 2016-03-13 15:34:27Love itanimal99Report 2013-03-26 22:38:43if they can’t sign their name to a comment, then they’re just bullying and not offering any real help. But I agree in that it seemed too short. Xnxx video Not to sound like some English teacher, but it needs some fleshing out. So fix you mistakes by proofreeading your future stories but don’t let anyone discourage you from writing more stories.anonymous readerReport 2013-03-25 20:41:26Ignore the poster who complains about an “English class.” He’s insufficiently literate, or he’d have heard the phrase “too short a time” along with “too short a season,” “too great a distance,” and so forth. Unfortunately, some people labelled your story negatively after seeing a few glaring violations and seem to ignore your skill as a storyteller. … So fix you mistakes by proofreeading your future stories but don’t let anyone discourage you from writing more stories.anonymous readerReport 2013-03-25 20:41:26Ignore the poster who complains about an “English class.” He’s insufficiently literate, or he’d have heard the phrase “too short a time” along with “too short a season,” “too great a distance,” and so forth.
