Good work and Thank Youanonymous readerReport 2011-03-16 21:11:48Young Author, i was hooked on your stories the moment i started reading, I liked how this was a more unusual style of writing (short sentancing), for me the story worked. Xnxx Good work and Thank Youanonymous readerReport 2011-03-12 01:10:21Great story, thank you! 17 s«1234»darthcaedusReport 2011-03-16 21:13:49Young Author, i was hooked on your stories the moment i started reading, I liked how this was a more unusual style of writing (short sentancing), for me the story worked. Thanks, too for putting some affection built up over time between Ben and Zac in, too, as it showed their bond growing as they each did what they could to show they cared for the other before making the ultimate effort to get together, rather than the typical sex-right-away model that’s prevalent in most stories on here. Could have been a good tale otherwise«1234» Could have been a good tale otherwise«1234» Good work and Thank Youanonymous readerReport 2011-03-12 01:10:21Great story, thank you! You gave enough details to let my imagination take care of the rest, which I also appreciate, and which also helped get me hard while I read and saw the boys in my mind’s eye. Normally such short sentences would make for choppy reading, but you did
