That would be HOT!!!!READERReport 2004-04-17 09:32:36potential. shud have had LOTs more flirting/build up n detail!READERReport 2004-04-05 20:16:56The story was too short,no build up.READERReport 2004-04-01 19:16:35a story cant be gay homophobic bastard i thought it was good«12» You need to try them yourself and write some true stories… Sex xnxx 6 comments«12»KomoeReport 2009-08-17 21:03:04It was interesting and hot but you seemed to rush it, even if all the sex were real and happened that fast, you need to find ways to extend the storyREADERReport 2004-06-09 12:59:52Good story!!! shud have had LOTs more flirting/build up n detail!READERReport 2004-04-05 20:16:56The story was too short,no build up.READERReport 2004-04-01 19:16:35a story cant be gay homophobic bastard i thought it was good«12» You need to try them yourself and write some true stories… You need to try them yourself and write some true stories… shud have had LOTs more flirting/build up n detail!READERReport 2004-04-05 20:16:56The story was too short,no build up.READERReport 2004-04-01 19:16:35a story cant be gay homophobic bastard i thought it was good«12» That would be HOT!!!!READERReport 2004-04-17 09:32:36potential. 6 comments«12»KomoeReport 2009-08-17 21:03:04It was interesting and hot but you seemed to rush it, even if all the sex were real and happened that fast, you need to find ways to extend the storyREADERReport 2004-06-09 12:59:52Good story!!!
