This is STUPID inattention to one’s work. 12 comments«123»Anonymous readerReport 2016-10-17 16:40:25The last person’s post I fully agree with & think exactly what/how they said it. Xnxx tv I can understand you being pissed off with the criticism you get; just understand that improvement best comes by responding to criticism, without criticism one tends to become delusional about one’s abilities, adopting an aura of self-perceived perfection. Please desist from posting until you learn more about WRITING!!!anonymous readerReport 2012-12-22 09:50:08Liked alot 9/10 from meanonymous readerReport 2012-11-21 11:13:19Yeah i Was using a mobile phone to read this story kind of hard reading it When you double spacing it but however great story :)«123» I suppose your level of education causes some problems, but you do try to make up for it with your imagination; it’s just a pity that lack of proof-reading makes the errors stand out like dog’s balls. So by closing off comments you are, in effect, sentencing yourself to self-deception regarding your abilities. You have spent a lot of time writing the 200+ stories on this site; no doubt you have improved, but, yes, there is still a lot of room for further improvement.