You really need to add more chapters.Anonymous readerReport 2016-07-09 02:19:27Hot that all of them got pregnant with his baby. Xnxx com while the plot was decent and had some alluring elements, it was lacking character development and realism. You should had added more parts.Anonymous readerReport 2016-06-30 21:55:58Please do more the best stories I’ve ever read PleaseMerc098Report 2016-03-31 08:25:36ok so apart from the spelling and grammar errors, your story has much to be desired. 45 comments«12345»Stealth EagleReport 2017-07-11 19:23:01I must say this is an excellent series I am giving the whole series a positive rating.Anonymous readerReport 2016-10-19 02:10:11After reading this hot story I feel that you dropped the ball. You should had added more parts.Anonymous readerReport 2016-06-30 21:55:58Please do more the best stories I’ve ever read PleaseMerc098Report 2016-03-31 08:25:36ok so apart from the spelling and grammar errors, your story has much to be desired. You should clarify which was doing what thus allowing better understanding of the situation. while the plot was decent and had some alluring elements, it was lacking character development and realism.
