SHIT. Keep writing!«12» Please stop writing and find another hobby. Xnxx com Keep writing!«12» This became confusing after awhile. Please stop writing and find another hobby. It does get tedious at times trying to follow the story line. SHIT. Your stories are badly written rip offs of other much better authors.krc1993Report 2013-09-24 04:52:54Anu females age 18-45 wanna roleplay? This became confusing after awhile. Your stories are badly written rip offs of other much better authors.krc1993Report 2013-09-24 04:52:54Anu females age 18-45 wanna roleplay? dont be a pussy!anonymous readerReport 2013-10-06 00:34:09Oh the humanity! is. 8 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2016-06-23 02:27:44this. The second problem was that it became repetitive. It does get tedious at times trying to follow the story line. Please stop writing and find another hobby. My question for BLUEHEATT himself is, “Why are you re-posting some of your stories?”
This story was first posted on 06-22-2012, under the same title, almost verbatim, except for the last few lines of the ending.PenKnave193Report 2013-09-23 13:41:48On the whole not a bad story.
