I don’t agree with other s, your language is fine.«1234» I had more problems reading some of the s that some people have made here about your story, then I did reading your story.gymgirlReport 2012-10-29 17:54:55Haha great story! Xnxx HopefullAuthorHopefullAuthorReport 2012-10-30 23:58:13Hello Stranger92
I just finished reading your story, and I want to say that I loved it. Keep up the good work. I don’t agree with other s, your language is fine.«1234» I had more problems reading some of the s that some people have made here about your story, then I did reading your story.gymgirlReport 2012-10-29 17:54:55Haha great story! You included enough detail to make the story interesting but not to much to make it boring. Your story was very well thought out. I was enjoying the story so much it made me sad to reach that point. HopefullAuthorHopefullAuthorReport 2012-10-30 23:58:13Hello Stranger92
I just finished reading your story, and I want to say that I loved it. The characters seemed realistic and almost true to life. I had more problems reading some of the s that some people have made here about your story, then I did reading your story.gymgirlReport 2012-10-29 17:54:55Haha great story! I agree with her 100%. The characters seemed realistic and almost true to life.
