I had more problems reading some of the comments that some people have made here about your story, then I did reading your story.gymgirlReport 2012-10-29 17:54:55Haha great story! You included enough detail to make the story interesting but not to much to make it boring. Xnxx tv Keep up the good work. I love a good romantic story that has a happy ending and yours sure did. It is a fantastic story. Your story was very well thought out. I love a good romantic story that has a happy ending and yours sure did. I don’t agree with other comments, your language is fine.«1234» I agree with her 100%. It is a fantastic story. The only ‘bad’ thing about your story that I hated to see, was that it had to end. You included enough detail to make the story interesting but not to much to make it boring. I agree with her 100%. Listen to the comment made by Gymgirl. I had more problems reading some of the comments that some people have made here about your story, then I did reading your story.gymgirlReport 2012-10-29 17:54:55Haha great story! You did a wonderful job of handling the dialogue, which is something that a lot of writers have problems with.
